My words in action

A lot of the stuff I work on is confidential, so I can’t include it here without risking being whisked away in a big black van (or whatever it is that happens when you break a non-disclosure agreement). Instead I’ve put together a before-and-after example of a fairly bog-standard company letter to show the difference a decent rewrite and proofread can make.

Bear in mind this is still fairly dry copy, even after I’ve worked my magic. If you’re after something with a bit more pizzazz, get in touch and I’ll send you some samples. And if you’re not sure if you want a proofread or a rewrite, you can find out what the difference is here.

The before...

The before...

The after...

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